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Post by Jonny Strider on Thu Apr 10, 2014 3:10 pm

General Information

Name:  Jonny Strider
Epithet: "Storm Bringer"
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Birthplace: Karate Island, South Blue
Species: Human
Orientation: Right Handed

Crew: No Crew Yet
Ship: No Ship Yet
Occupation: Combatant
Rank: N/A
Bounty: None yet
Bounty Collected:  N/A
Allegiance: Pirate
Dream(s):

- Jonny's greatest dream is the aspiration to be the strongest fighter in the world.
- He also has a goal to become a Supernova.
- Like other pirates, Jonny has a goal to find the One Piece.


Character Information

Flag:
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Appearance:


Most of the people at his village described Jonny as a handsome boy. Other girls on Karate Island have said he's cute or dreamy. This outlook on him is enhanced by his good nature. The shade of his skin tone is cream-white. His hair is reddish-brown, being mid-length. It hangs down to the top of his back. He has two large bangs hanging on each side of his face. His hair is smooth with the bottom parts being a little spiky. The last part of his appearance is that he has black eyes that are as black as night.

The clothes Jonny wears is pretty much simple. It's very easy to describe, considering he wears a few pieces of clothing. He wears a white, short-sleeve shirt. The shirt's symbol looks interesting. It's a cyan-clue ball with a ghost tail on top of it. On the lower half of his body he has on baggy teal shorts. They cover half of his calves. The next pieces of clothing is his shoes. They are black in color and the openings from where he puts his feet in reach above his ankles. Finally, he wears a black jacket with white trims and lining. It was given to Jonny as a gift before leaving his home island.

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Personality:  Jonny is a kind hearted person. He cares greatly for his friends and family. At times, he would help them out with something they need assistance doing. He's thoughtful of others as well. He puts there wants and needs ahead of his, even his dream. After all, he has all the time in the world to achieve it. He is also helpful with others. When someone needs help, no matter how big or small, he'll be there to help them. Whether it's helping stacking up supplies or being there to comfort a friend, he'll help no matter what.

As part of him being a fighter, he possesses a fondness of combat. He enjoys a good fight and will take anyone up on a challenge. This is either due to his love of battle or his kind nature to not refuse. He will even smirk at times when a fight is about to begin. His favorite phrase to to say is "Time to fight" which goes well with his hunger for battle.

Along with his love for combat, Jonny is also a courageous warrior. In battle, he shows bravery towards his opponents, trying his best not to let them shake him up. Despite his love for fighting, He tries to remain serious while in combat. Outside of battle, He is a positive person who tries to look on the bright side of things. However, as brave as he tries to be, Jonny is afraid of something. That something is losing the people he cares about. It's very painful losing your friends and family.

Despite his kind nature and wanting to help others, Jonny has a hot temper, meaning he's easily angered. He can be irritated at simple insults. He can easily be enraged at insults that mock his skill as a fighter. For example, when someone says he stinks as a fighter he'll explode. He can also be angered by other things, such as bullying or child abuse.


Character History


Background
Jonny was born to Sonia and Jake Strider, two former pirates living on Karate Island. When he was born, the doctor's informed them of their baby being full of energy as his legs and arms were moving a lot. It made Sonia happy to see her son so energetic. Jake was also proud that he was a father. As an infant, Jonny was often curious. When he could crawl, he would try to wonder off in the new house his parents had settled in. Before he wondered off too far, Sonia would pick him up and try to satisfy his curiosity.

As he grew into his childhood, he has always been interested in combat, like his father. Seeing his mother and father practice their technique amazed Jonny. He also saw a battle between his dad and one of his crew mates. This inspired him from a young age to become the best fighter in the world. When he reached the age of 6, he asked his parents to start training him as they said they will start his training when he was older. They agreed to train Jonny now, but only the basics such as stances and how to launch punches and kicks. This continued for months and he was advancing quickly in the basics of his training. Already he knew the stances and how to launch a punches and kicks.

Years have passed and Jonny was becoming more skilled in karate. His dream, courage, determination, and confidence helped as well. At the age of 10, a battle was arranged for Jonny to test what he has learned. The opponent was a random fighter, 5 years older than him. When the battle started, he was able to dodge and block some of the fighter's attacks. He still took hits, but brushed it off as he can endure a large amount of damage. He countered the fighter with what he has learned, landing punches, kicks, elbow strikes, and knee strikes. With a final spin kick, the fighter was down, no longer having the energy to rise once more. Jake and Sonia were proud of their son winning his first battle. After the match, Jonny and his parents were kind enough to help the teenaged fighter and his parents to a medic to recover. He complemented Jonny on his "sweet" moves, giving the boy a big smile.

As a toddler to his childhood, Jake has told Jonny of him and his mother being pirates and having many adventures along with their crew. This interested Jonny with him saying he wanted to be pirate too. His father said he could be a pirate and join a crew when he was older. Being a pirate was the start of his dream of becoming the strongest fighter. 6 years since his first battle, Jonny was now 16. Through these 6 years, he has advanced further into his Karate. He has even created new techniques. Jonny wonders, when he eats a Devil Fruit, what powers he will have. His father told him about the Devil Fruits, that it gives you any possible power, but each one is unique. Jonny wants to get a Devil Fruit, no matter which type he ends up with.

On a certain day, which was before he decided to set to sea, the boy came across a Devil Fruit on his island. His parents were also there to witness it. He was out on the coast practicing his techniques. His mother and father were both watch. It was basically a test to see how much he has grown. If he was going to set sail out to sea, he was going to need to be strong. After all, it was is dream to become the strongest fight in the world. When he finished, his father was happily content with the progress Jonny had made. The boy then, spotted a odd-looking fruit with swirls on it sitting close to the shore. Jonny expected it to have washed up on shore. He went to go pick it up and then, walked back over to his parents. They instantly recognized it as a Devil Fruit, telling there son so. Jonny was excited and asked, if he could eat it. His father told him he can, but warned him he will lose his ability to swim for the rest of his life. This was the common weakness among all Devil Fruit Users. However, the incredible powers they might get provide more than enough compensation.

Jonny considered what he will lose in exchanged for the possibility of a unique power as he stood thinking over what he might gain. He had decided to take a bite of the fruit, which tasted disgusting. His expression indicated it. His parents watched with anticipation as their son swallowed the piece of the fruit. His mother was nervous as to what ability he got. If it turned out to be useless, he would have lost his skill to swim for nothing. His father suggested to try and fire something out of his hand or see what would be affected as a result. Jonny did as he said and held out his right hand and concentrated. To the family's surprise, electricity fired out of it. The fruit, which he ate gave him the power of lightning. Jonny was excited to have such an amazing power. It was decided that he was going to train himself to better master these abilities. For weeks, he practiced on shooting lightning from his hands and even becoming the element itself. This meant that Jonny was a Logia-type User as indicated by his father. His parents often came to the coast to see their son train. Every visit, they see he was getting better at utilizing his powers. He even learned some new abilities and created some new moves. With his father's knowledge on certain Devil Fruits, he informed Jonny of his own fruit's name, the Goro Goro no Mi.

Now that Jonny is 16, he asked his parents that he's ready to set sail and become a pirate. Sonia was a little worried for her son as well as Jake. He might have been a trained fighter, but there are still unknown dangers out in the world. Jake asked his son was he really ready to set sail and become a pirate. He gave a confident and resounding "Yes". He was very determined to become a pirate. Jake gave a smile and gave his son a hug, which he gladly returned. Sonia also joined in and it turned into a group hug. After that, Jonny went to his room and packed his stuff into a backpack. He then, exited his home and waved to his mother and father as they waved back with smiles of pride. This was the start of Jonny's journey.


Abilities:

Karate: Having trained on Karate Island for years, Jonny is adept in physical combat and as such, proves to be formidable, even without his Devil Fruit powers.

Inventory

Weapon: N/A

Weapon Description: N/A

Weapon Special Abilities:

No Special Weapon Abilities

Weapon History: N/A


Power Level Information

Character Strength: Trained
Character Speed:  Proficient
Character Resilience:  Proficient
Character Dexterity:  Proficient

Devil Fruit Information

Devil Fruit Name: Goro Goro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Progression:

Level 1-Level 2 requires 3 threads.
Level 2-Level 3 requires 5 threads.

Current Devil fruit Level: Level 1
Devil Fruit Mastery Level:

Level 1: The starting stage on the mastery of his powers. At this level, Jonny is capable of generating infinite amounts of electricity and manipulating it at will. He is also able to transform into lightning as well. He can so far construct his respective element into basic objects such as swords and spheres. He is also able to increase the damage of his physical attacks by enhancing them with lightning. Being a Logia-type Devil Fruit user, Jonny possesses the common trait of intangibility. This allows him to dodge physical attacks by transforming into lightning and letting them pass through his body. Jonny is also able to electrocute individuals with his elemental form by contact due to the properties of electricity. At level 1, Jonny is capable of generating a maximum voltage of 100 million.

Level 2:] The stage where he is beginning to grasp his Devil Fruit powers. At this level, Jonny is capable of generating infinite amounts of electricity and manipulating it at will. He is also able to transform into lightning as well. He can so far construct his respective element into animals along with more complicated objects than just swords and spheres. He is also able to increase the damage of his physical attacks by enhancing them with lightning. He can add his lightning to an existing external source, augmenting it's strength for more powerful attacks, this includes thunderclouds. He can also melt metal with his electrical heat, reshaping it into basic shapes, such as swords or staffs. This would take 2 posts for the metal to become melted and malleable. Being a Logia-type Devil Fruit user, Jonny possesses the common trait of intangibility. This allows him to dodge physical attacks by transforming into lightning and letting them pass through his body. Jonny is also able to electrocute individuals with his elemental form by contact due to the properties of electricity. He is able to travel at it's speed when transformed. This allows him to travel long distances more easily and is beneficial in combat when trying to catch an opponent. At level 2, Jonny is capable of generating a maximum voltage of 150 million.

Level 3: This is the stage where he is highly skilled in utilizing the powers of the Goro Goro no Mi. At this level, Jonny is capable of generating infinite amounts of electricity and manipulating it at will. He is also able to transform into lightning as well. He can construct his respective element into animals and other objects including more complex ones. He is also able to increase the damage of his physical attacks by enhancing them with lightning. He can add his lightning to an existing external source, augmenting it's strength for more powerful attacks, this includes thunderclouds. He can also melt metal with his electrical heat, reshaping it into more complex shapes.  This would take 1 post for the metal to become melted and malleable. Being a Logia-type Devil Fruit user, Jonny possesses the common trait of intangibility. This allows him to dodge physical attacks by transforming into lightning and letting them pass through his body. Jonny is able to electrocute individuals with his elemental form by contact due to the properties of electricity. He is also now able to travel at it's speed when transformed. This allows him to travel long distances more easily and is beneficial in combat when trying to catch an opponent. Another ability he is able to do is travel through solid matter while he is electricity. The matter has to be conductive, of course. He is also able to jump-start his heart, if in a situation it happens to stop. At level 3, Jonny is capable of generating a maximum voltage of 200 million.

Devil Fruit Abilities: The Goro Goro no Mi is a Logia-type Devil Fruit that gives the user the ability to generate, manipulate, and even transform into electricity, making the person a Lightning Human. This gives Jonny an array of powerful and versatile abilities. Like other Logia users, he can become intangible. This, in turn, allows him to dodge every attack launched at him with the the exception of dodging ones imbued with Haki so effortlessly. Additionally, Jonny is capable of generating limitless quantities of lightning allowing for him to inflict massive damage to his opponents. He is also able to manipulate his respective element.

The Goro Goro no Mi is considered to be one of the most powerful Devil Fruits to exist as it has a reputation of being "invincible". With more training and advancement in levels, Jonny will be able to travel at lightning-fast speeds, out-matching his opponent in terms of travel as well as  providing benefit in combat. He will also be also able to travel through solid matter that is conductive. Mainly it is used for Haki attacks. Another power Jonny will be able to use is jump-start his heart when in a certain situation it happens to stop. This technique can make him appear immortal.

Devil Fruit Weaknesses:

Rubber: Jonny's unique weakness is rubber, since it's a natural insulator for electricity. This makes the user of the Gomu Gomu no Mi his natural enemy. Also, Jonny loses his intangibility against the user's physical attacks.

Water: Like all Devil Fruit Users, Jonny can't swim and sinks when submerged in sea water or any other standing body of water. He also can't move his body when enveloped by water as well. Jonny also has his power drained when he becomes knee-deep in standing water.

Sea Stone: Jonny's power can also be drained when sea stone comes in contact with his body.

Haki: Another common weakness Jonny shares with Logia-type Devil Fruit users is his vulnerability to Haki-based attacks. Even when in elemental form, he is still able to be hurt as if he were solid.

Combat Information

Unarmed Combat:

Strength Fist: Jonny focuses all of his strength into his fist. He then, thrusts it towards the enemy, dealing twice the damage a normal punch would. It can also be used to strike someone sideways. This attack is strong enough to dents and cracks in stone. It can also deliver an impact through light-armor, However, the recipient is inflicted with half the damage. This would mean that the impact would be as strong as a regular punch.

Twister Kick: Jonny spins clockwise with his right leg or counter-clockwise with his left. The speed of his rotation is moderate. With this technique, Jonny can inflict damage to enemies from all angles. The attack doesn't differentiate between friend or foe, so he must be careful. The attack is as strong as a regular kick, so it cannot penetrate light armor, much less the heavy type.

Strength Gatling: A variation of Strength Fist in the form of a multiple attack. Jonny launches numerous punches at his opponents to deliver accumulative damage. Each punch is only as strong as an average one, so he relies on getting in multiple hits to cause massive damage. Also, Jonny's punches are aimed at the enemy's chest.

Rising Dragon: A technique Jonny has created within his training on Karate Island years ago. He lands two punches in the opponent's chest starting with his right then, left fist. He follows up with a right roundhouse kick. He then, rotates to his left and lands a spin kick with his left leg.

Soaring Eagle: An aerial attack due to it being executed in mid-air. Jonny jumps up into the air and does a spin kick with his right leg. This attack can be use for either opponents on the ground or in mid-air. However, the kind of enemies Jonny can hit is limited to how high he can jump. Because of his exceptional strength, he can jump up to 5 1/2 feet.

Weapon Based Combat: No weapon-based techniques


Devil Fruit Based Combat:

Rumble Bolt: Jonny fires a lightning bolt from his hand. The voltage of the electricity is enough to cause first degree burns. The Rumble Bolt also possess enough force to push an enemy back 2 feet.

Ikazuchiken( 雷拳 Lightning Fist): Jonny surrounds one or both of his fists in electricity, increasing the damage dealt to the opponent. This attack is used to increase the power of his physical attacks by double. He can sustain this enhancement for 2 posts, but must wait 3 posts for it to be used again. When Jonny uses his other lightning techniques, he has to cancel out "Ikazuchiken".

Thunder Surge: 1-100 Million Volts: Jonny releases an electrical discharge from his body with a maximum voltage of 100 million. He uses his hands primarily to execute this technique. He can also use his feet or release it from his entire body. Jonny can use his hands to generate an electric arc between them, creating a continuous stream of electricity.

Raichū( 雷柱 Lightning Pillar): A powerful electrical attack used to inflict large amounts of damage to an opponent from a distance. Jonny uses his hand to fire a lightning bolt above his target, creating a cluster of electricity. With a downward motion of his palm, a large, powerful electric pillar is fired down. The target hit by this attack is fried. Jonny can also fire this technique from his hand in a massive beam of lightning.

Thunder Smash: Described as a giant version of the "Rumble Bolt". Jonny fires a massive charge of electricity to cover a wide field of area. The radius of this electrical blast is 20 feet. This is used to defeat a group of enemies due to the large size of the attack.

Scatter Strike: A variation of the "Rumble Bolt". Jonny fires multiple lightning bolts simultaneously from one  or both of his hand. It is used for a specific target or a group of enemies. Each one is just as powerful as the "Rumble Bolt". The attack is widespread, allowing for Jonny to taking down multiple foes at once.

Combo Combat: None Yet


Haki: None Yet

RP Sample: N/A


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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:38 am

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Personality

Right so he'll take anyone up on a challenge, but he doesn't fight girls ? Total Contradiction please change this

He only fights the evil girls ? This to me seems very Gary Stuish along with your appearance I'd reccomend removing this also as your character needs to have more than one flaw nobodies character is perfect.

Everybody feels fear, You cannot control whether or not you feel fear you may be able to limit the effect said fear has on you but you cannot simply stamp it out and not feel it at all


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The Lightning would destroy the Blade as soon as it would touch it


Devil Fruit

Jonny would not be resistent to heat at all, his intangibility relates to solid objects heat is more of an atmosphere so he'd still feel it.
Lightning is just electricity, it gets hot over time but that's like friction it warms up over the course of time due to constant over working. The lightning itself doesn't produce heat. Relate it to storms, storms aren't hot if we had a storm with lightning thats 5400 Farenheit people would be burnt alive.

Melting of objects - right this is possible however its not instant , there would need to be a post count limit for the electricity insdie of the body to heat up via fricition to enable this.

Merging - I'm not going to allow this as it seems rather similar to Wapol's Fruit


Devil Fruit Attacks

Rumble Bolt - Remove stuff about being difficult to dodge this is determined by the target's stats and abilities not yours also remove the blackened body it's determined by stats once again.

Thunder Surge - Same as above

Joden - Lightning wont heat the air, unless you give a number of posts to build up this heat.

Thunder Smash : What Radius?

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Post by Jonny Strider on Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:41 am

I have made the edits you have listed.

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Charge Up Time for melting metals need to be two posts for Level 2. Chage this then it is approved.

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I have made edit

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Forming of the Excision Pirates - http://onepiecememories.forumotion.co.uk/t352-serious-the-forming-of-the-excision-pirates

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