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Norowa no Kōshō

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Norowa no Kōshō

Post by Kitsune-me on Tue Oct 21, 2014 12:35 am



Fighting Style Name:  Norowa no Kōshō
Origin: Originating on an island long lost in name, it was often used by peasants or strong warriors. Some of these peasants left to join the ninja clan and brought their art with them. It is one of the lesser known styles of fighting upon the flotilla.

The island of which this practice has its origins was razed the the ground with few survivors. Those who survived where the ones who drove off the invaders, but too little too late. Few stayed once the ninja clan arrived, many providing them with what little they had left over, picking through the ruins, and many of the able bodied warriors decided to continue the practice of the Bisento, though the old ways were changed over time. Bitterness at the lose of their home changed this style from the more defensive style it was, into this aggressive, devastating style it has become today.

Overview: The style consists of wide arcing sweeps of the blade, but may also be used for straight forward stabs. A versatile weapon, the style has two starting positions. The first is holding the weapon with one hand near the pommel, and the other hand as far forward as comfortably possible, with the blade tip pointing up and being held at waist level. The second involves holding it above the users head in a similar position, but with the tip facing down, with the forward hand being flat rather than gripping the shaft. There are a few variations, but those all depend on individual techniques and the users personal preference.

~Zero State~
Strong arcing swings, and quick thrusts of the Bisento define the basic form of this fighting style, Nothing truly exceptional, but devastating with the long range the Bisento grants,especially against the less experienced and larger groups.


Technique Name: Norowa no Kōshō : Rending Arc
State: Zero
Type: Bisento(Blade)
Description & After effect:Starting from the higher of the two formal starting stances, the user with the back right hand swings the bisento around him, swinging it left to build momentum, then out in front of him to cleave all that stand before him, catching the bisento with his left hand so it does not fly away from the user.
Side Effect(s):N/A
Stat Requirement(s): Advanced Strength

Technique Name: Norowa no Kōshō : Skull Crusher
State: Zero
Type:Bisento(Blade)
Description & After effect: The user takes the pommel and smashes it into the face of head of the enemy, and drives it home, often with a crunching sound being heard. The target if hit, is often disoriented after the strike.
Side Effect(s): N/A
Stat Requirement(s): Any

Technique Name: Norowa no Kōshō : Titans Fangs
State: Zero
Type: Bisento (Blade)
Description & After effect: The user brings the Bisento up high with both hands, and brings it down hard on one shoulder of the target, then quickly brings it around for another swing at the other shoulder, aiming to cleave off the arms of the enemy.
Side Effect(s): N/A
Stat Requirement(s): Any

~First State~
Jigoku e no kōka
Kitsune-me takes a few moments to meditate on all his failings, all he has done wrong, and all that he will lose if he falls here. He reaches into his own inner hell, and uses it to fuel him on to destroy whatever it is he faces, as he shows his enemies what hell truly is.


Technique Name: Norowa no Kōshō : Impaler
State: First State
Type: Bisento (Blade)
Description & After effect: The user slams his Bisento pommel down into the ground, grabs his target, and flips them onto blade, impaling through their chest.
Side Effect(s): Temporarily disarms the user.
Stat Requirement(s): Strength : Lethal-Profesional

~Second State~
Second
State is equivalent to Luffy's Gear Third and It can only be used after
extensive training and once reaching certain stats which require the
techniques.


Technique Name: Norowa no Kōshō :
State:
Type:
Description & After effect:
Side Effect(s): N/A
Stat Requirement(s): Any

~Third State~
Third State is gaining mastery over the fighting style and being able to do everything with the fighting style.


Technique Name: Norowa no Kōshō :
State:
Type:
Description & After effect:
Side Effect(s): N/A
Stat Requirement(s): Any


Last edited by Kitsune-me on Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:23 am; edited 1 time in total


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Re: Norowa no Kōshō

Post by FroYo on Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:17 am

Pros:

+ Nice and clear explanation of the technique's over view

+ The Descriptions and After effects for each technique is well explained and easy to understand

+ You successfully explained the requirements for each technique

Cons:

- Origin could use a bit more explaining (at least a paragraph will do), keep this in mind for you future techniques

- For your technique Impaler, the stat requirements may vary depending on the type of foe you are facing. I recommend that you do not stay on Lehtal stat and that you do something like (Lethal-Professional) since not every character on this site is gonna have the same body build and weight.

Conclusion:

Once you change the stat requirement for that technique then you're good to go!





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Re: Norowa no Kōshō

Post by FroYo on Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:26 am

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