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Berry CP Agent

Post by HareDonut on Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:06 am

General Information

Name:  Berry Suchin
Epithet: Beri
Age: 22
Gender: Male 
Birthplace: Swallow Island (North Blue)
Species: Human
Orientation: Right Handed
Crew: N/A
Ship: N/A
Occupation: Fighter
Rank: N/A
Bounty: N/A
Crimes Committed: N/A
Bounty Collected: N/A
Allegiance: Cipher Pol
Dream(s): Reach the level of CP-8

Character Information

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Berry is tall and thin. He has fluffy black hair and reddish-brown eyes. He is usually dressed in a black leisure suit, with a white shirt and combat boots. He sometimes rolls it up when he fighting. He is often seen with a Orange Juice which he always calls OJ. He wears a black leisure suit, with a white shirt and combat boots. A somewhat regular uniform for a CP agent. But with accompanied with his treasured black scarf from his grand father. He stands at 6'7 I guess you could say tall with pearly white perfect teeth.

Personality: Berry seems to be very laid-back and easygoing fairly quiet individual who tends to point out information to his crewmates. He has been shown as unrelenting to his enemies as he had no qualms in attempting to strike an almost-downed Pirate a second time immediately after a first hit. He is loyal to the World Government and his comrades. He takes everything lightly regardless of the severity of the moment. In surprising, perilous and unexpected situations, he is apparently never shocked. He is also completely calm and cool-headed, even in tense situations. Berry's careless behavior shows very little mercy towards his enemies. Often comments that some of the abilities of his opponents are quite frightening.

Character History

People were opening shop, show casing people who were new to the island to the station where they fill out paper work to doc and trade their various merchandise, kids gathering around to listen to stories of pirates, marines, bounty hunters, you name it. 

Then there was one family of great explorers, a family that just wanted to celebrate the birthday of their 7 year old boy by taking him out to the wilderness for his first ever expedition. Harry Suchin and his lovely wife Cecillia Giddings held the hand of their only child, Berry Suchin. What they thought was a safe and common path to take was the path that would be soaked with the blood and chunks of anything living. 

The second 11:00am struck everybody could hear explosions going off at the docks. Unsure of what to think people just all gathered together at the center of town. People were confused, was it just a big fight that broke out between two pirate crews? was it an accident? did a seaking appear and needed to be executed? nobody had a clue on what was going on and it began to scare the town as they could see smoke and flames followed by a pirate flag being raised in the distance. 

The town watched as their fears had been confirmed, The Ravenous Rider pirates entered the town covered in blood and a little bit of human skin chunks on their clothes as they demanded to see the owner of the island. However, there was no owner of the island. Everyone just pretty much lived together in peaceful harmony so they didn't really have any need for one definite ruler on the island. However the six strongest men one of them being Berry's dad stepped up to the crew of the Ravenous Riders. 

However the strongest weren't nothing compared to the Ravenous Riders and were quickly slaughtered before they could get a word out against the pirate crew. Unable to pose a threat to the crew everyone just submitted to the demands of the pirate crew. within a week the town quickly plummeted, nobody knew what to do, nobody knew what was going on with the outside world, or anything. They were forced to live in the dark and kept uneducated. The Suchin family was no longer a family, The mother quickly fell into a deep state of depression and died from stress related illnesses leaving Berry alone to deal with the pain of losing both his parents. 

Berry just lived with the now small society of the people who were born in one collective slum. Berry however developed one goal in mind, leave and get someone to save us and release them from the clutches of the Ravenous riders. Packing his bag it was mostly filled with clothing that was too big of him that his parents wore, minimum amounts of food and his fathers destroyed blade he once used to protect his family now nothing more useful than a memory of a once hard working and honest man. 

3 years later at the age of 10 Berry's attempts at getting help for his island was now a hopeless task as nobody dared to oppose or challenge the pirate crew fearing their great power. Angered and frustrated at the world he did nothing but cry. He had promised his family that adopted him that he would get help, 3 years of life wasted, 3 years of an unfulfilled promise was frustrating to bare in his young mind. However one day Berry had witnessed men in black suits quickly dispatch of a pirate crew that was currently staying on the island he was searching for help for. 

Thinking that he had finally found the help he needed he pleaded with the men, and they refused to accept his request due to the government not giving them the orders to do so. However there was one man in the group that felt bad for Berry he had gone through something similar in his life. He slipped Berry a note promising Berry if he were to join their organization, he would be given the power necessary to accomplish his goals and dreams but what Berry did not know is this organization was Cipher Pol the organization that was the lap dog of the world government who was responsible for the Ravenous Rider pirates running amok. 

3 more years passed by as Berry was becoming the most promising of the new recruits into Cipher Pol. He learned Boxing from a instructor he was quite good at it and because he saw that not a lot of people was using it and he wanted to be unique. He was even the winner in a fighting tournament for a devil fruit that no one knew anything about. Since nobody knew anything about it there wasn't much competition for fear the devil fruit would grant a useless power and give severe amounts of weaknesses. Which is why most of the members of Cipher Pol decided sticking with their techniques would be the more safe and less risky route of doing things. 
After receiving proper training he showed great promise and was soon promoted to CP-7 with a new dream and journey to become CP-8. During his trainings he developed his Devil Fruit abilities. He was also helped by the same instructor help him incorporate his Boxing with his Devil fruit abilities. He spent 3 more years trainings to develop moves like Tyulpaw and Grappawl.

Abilities: Great Boxer: Berry is very good at boxing that was the fighting style he used to win the tournament. 


Weapon: N/A

Weapon Description: N/A

Weapon Special Abilities: N/A

Weapon History: N/A

Power Level Information

Character Strength: Advanced 
Character Speed:  Trained
Character Resilience:  Trained
Character Dexterity:  Proficient

Devil Fruit Information

Devil Fruit Name:Nikyu Nikyu no Mi(Paw Paw Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type:Paramecia
Devil Fruit Progression:
3 threads=level 2
5 threads=level 3
Current Devil fruit Level: 1
Devil Fruit Mastery Level: Berry can at most Paw himself or other people short distances.
Devil Fruit Abilities:   This Devil Fruit allows him to transform parts and most likely all of his body, into diamond.

Level 1:
The user can reflect/block any and all attacks but only with his paws
The user can even repel people, including themselves, allowing them a limited very fast travel.
The user is able to "Paw" the air to create paw shaped air bubbles which leaves paw shaped prints in stone and wood etc
The user is able to Repel people great distances such as island to island. Making somewhat safe and fast travel.
The user is able to repel humongous things such as buildings, Large rocks or even Giants.
The user can not only repel physical objects, but also intangible ones, such as Horo-Horo ghosts, air, and even sensations, such as pain or tiredness.

Devil Fruit Weaknesses:

Combat Information

Unarmed Combat:

Weapon Based Combat: N/A

Devil Fruit Based Combat:

Paw Paw Tyulpaw: Using a palm pad, the user repels any large object, sending it flying swiftly towards its target.

Paw Paw Grappawl: After touching the users paw pad to someone, they are sent flying to a location 30 to 60 meters away, and hit the ground leaving a large paw shaped crater.

Telepawtation: Not actual teleportation, the user repels himself with a paw pad and is sent nearly instantly to a location between 20 and 40 meters away.

Paw Paw Disarm: The user places their palm pad in front of an attack, and sends it flying away from them at high speed. If the attack was made with a melee weapon, such as a sword, the weapon is sent flying out of the attackers hands

Combo Combat: None at the moment

Haki: None at the moment

RP Sample:

Last edited by HareSandwich on Mon Jun 22, 2015 8:08 am; edited 9 times in total

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Re: Berry CP Agent

Post by FroYo on Tue Jan 06, 2015 7:51 am

Wild Instinct: Berry goes into a state where he can move at better speeds than before and sense the air movements from the opponent. The only bad thing about this is he cannot attack in this stat he can also neither talk.

That technique isn't going to work, you can't just sense air movements. That's similar to Haki which he doesn't have. Plus, there are people out there faster than him atm. This technique wasn't explain the background either. I suggest you just remove it.

Also, your character knows boxing? Great! Explain how he learnt it though, cause there's nothing in his background that explains this.

One more thing, why would a cipher pol agent offer a kid to join? Explain. Explain. And explain even more.

Once those changes have been made, I'll consider approving.

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Re: Berry CP Agent

Post by FroYo on Tue Jan 06, 2015 8:47 am

Can't believe I missed this but your Devil Fruit levels are gonna need explaining, the progression is gonna have to be added aswell

Also where is Swallow Island located?

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Re: Berry CP Agent

Post by FroYo on Tue Jan 06, 2015 9:11 am

Now, it's approved

Unless overruled

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