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The Queen of Maggots

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The Queen of Maggots

Post by Sweet Dreams on Thu Mar 19, 2015 9:47 pm

General Information

Name:  Alice Grimm
 Theme:Bad Apple
Epithet: Queen of Maggots
Age: 25 
Gender: Female
Birthplace: Hakaba Island-West Blue
Species: Human
Orientation: Ambidextrous but appears Left Handed

Crew: The Lost Souls (former)
Ship: The Dead man's Ferry (Former)
Occupation: Captain
Bounty: 320,001
Crimes Committed: Multiple counts of Murder
Multiple counts of Torture
Attacking the Sabaody Archipelago Auctioning House
Multiple counts of theft
Destruction of Property
Allegiance: Pirate
Dream(s): Be truly loved
Get rid of that stupid one beli on her bounty
Get as much out of life as she can.
Avenge her fallen crew

Character Information

Flag:
The Lost Souls Flag:

Appearance:
Alice Grimm:

Alice Grimm, many would agree that she was beautiful. Standing at 5'6 with long flowing light pink hair,pale skin and more then enough in the curves and chest department Alice often has many men and even some of the same sex chasing after her for one reason or another. But many have said her dark grey eyes can be more then a tad creepy,as no pupil can been seen making most think she cant see, this is not true and really the opposite really as Alice has perfect vision...maybe too perfect. behind her light pink lips that almost always are turned up in a small smile Alice has sharpish teeth,sharper then most humans but not not monster sharp.

 One would see Alice dressed in her Gothic Lolita dress, a short Gothic Victorian dress with pink and white ruffles and ribbons for the corset that goes with it. A miniature hat rests on her head a candy striped ribbon tied around it with an rose,always a different color then when it was last seen tucked in it.

 Strangely enough Alice doesn't wear shoes, she hates to,at most she will wear stockings many striped black and white ones but she likes to goes completely barefoot when ever she can.

 On her chest she has a tattoo of her old Crews Jolly Roger.Around her neck she wears a small pocket watch with a picture of her mother and father in it. She believes that the day of her death will be the day it stops so she keeps it close at all times. One of the stranger things about her is not her clothes but her nails,she paints them...Whats that? Painting your nail isn't strange? For Alice it is every time one were to see her the paint on her nails is always a different color some even saying they have seen her nails twelve different colors or more in a single day. Hanging from one ear hidden behind her hair is a two inch pink rabbit plushie she uses for stealth missions with her devil fruit powers.
 And tied around her waist resting on her hip a hideous teddy bear, stitching covers it from head to toe the grey coat it used to have now mostly covered in colorful patches its most noticeable is a cartoonist bandage on its stomach. Its eyes are mismatched buttons the left a deep black, the right a hot pink and with a mouth of a zipper,  This teddy bear is the most important thing to her not allowing anyone not even her body guard to touch it. And what do you ask is this ugly teddy bears name? Why BooBoo Mcfluffykins!

Personality: Alice is called many things, strange,creepy a happy-go-lucky airhead at times even but everyone who truly knows her knows she is mostly a hopeless romantic,often being seen reading a romance novel at lest once a day. But even so her own love life seems hopeless always being rejected by the ones she loves,but she won't give up vowing to find that one true soul mate even if its hard for her to get close to others out of fear of losing them again or by letting them down.

She has a love for anything Sugary, colorful or soft!

But of course there are other sides about her so lets talk about them...shall we?

...Anger.

She has two types of anger, normal and her sadistic side. Her anger normally comes up if one to point out the 1 beli in the end of her bounty, calling her The Queen of Maggots the stupid nickname the world government has given her. Her sadistic side comes out rarely but some ways to see them is to insult the ones she hold close to her heart and people why try to try to touch her pocket watch as she believes that when the watch stops it will be the day she dies as everyone who owns the watch has been found dead and with it stopped.

Another way to see her sadistic side of her is with her torturing where she often calls victims screams them singing and the more heart breaking the more beautiful their "Songs" are to her.

But this doesn't mean she is an evil twisted bitch in fact she only tortures a person if it calls for it...even if its only because shes afraid shell snap again and this time not snap out of it...If anything she is a fragile soul often hiding the sadness she had behind silent or a big dumb grin. Having lost all but her first mate Jin years ago she struggles to accept their deaths blaming herself. No one but Jin knows these feelings and has spent many a night drinking and comforting his younger friend.

It is because of this that despite what it looks like on the surface Alice is afraid to let anyone close to her out of fear of them leaving her like many have in the past, or letting people down like she did with her crew when she failed to protect them in battle.As such she has a fear of being alone,to the point where she always needs a person around even if they don't talk just having someone near by calms her and helps her think straight. If she were to be left alone or put in a position where someone she cares about placed their life in her hands this could often lead to panic attacks,dizziness and sometimes even stress eating or blacking out.
Character History


Background
Alice Grimm and her sister Olivia Grimm were born on a stormy night to a man named Charon and his wife Isabella. Alice the older by two minutes had her fathers eyes, a dark grey like storm clouds and her grandmothers hair a light flowing pink. While Olivia got her mothers silver blue hair and dark green eyes, something that Alice still admits she is jealous of.

Their father raised them as her mother died when they were born giving them their names with her dying breath.
Alice and Olivia grew up learning the ways of a trader and merchant as their father was in charge of a small crew who traveled the rivers and ports of Hakaba to deliver much needed good to villages on it. As such the Grimm family was respected greatly something Alice didn't like as many people only were her friend to get on the good side of the family,or were only nice to her out of her father possibly stopping trade if they so much as made her frown.

Then one fated day she was playing with her doll near the bank of the main river close to one of the larger villages  when she trips her doll falling into the river its clothes and hair burning away as the corrosive waters ate away at it before sinking below the black waters. Alice then did the only thing a five year old normally did...She started to cry,she only had been crying for about a minute or two when a soft voice spoke from the darkness of the forest. "Why do you cry?"

 Turning Alice could make out a small form in the shadows before she told them of how she lost her doll. After a moment or two something flew out of the shadows and landed in her lap,a teddy bear it looked like it had been repaired many times and was covered in stitches like scars. "You can have him instead,he keeps the monsters away better..." It was then she heard her father calling her,time for her lessons. She stood up and started back towards the ship before stopping and turns back "Whats his name?" She asks before the hidden figure replies "Booboo....BooBoo Mcfluffykins.."

Every day from then on Alice would sneak away from the ship back to the place with her bear and talked to the hidden girl telling stories and sharing candies. Sugar Skulls,colored candy shaped skulls were something she liked to make and shared happy with her mysterious friend. Then on the last day of her stay at this village she met her friend and they talked and laughed,one in the sun and one hidden in shadows.

 It was then Alice decided to ask finally "Why do you hide?" Her friend stopped laughing suddenly and grew quiet. "Place I wish you would come out.." Alice says "Promise you won't run away..." Alice giggles and nods promising before her eyes widen as her friend stepped out into the light ,a child no more then 5 or six stood before her bright green cat eyes stared into her storm grey ones her hair a tangled black mess but the most frightening thing about her? 

Fresh red and pink scars covers her arms and legs where no cloth covered the worst of them all two scars,one on ether sides of her mouth sliding up to her cheekbones like some sick smile. "H-Hi My name is Crow.." She says smiling flinching from the pain it caused. Now normally Alice would of turned tail and ran like any child her age but she knew Crow was no monster,she saw the kindness behind that monstrous face. So instead of running away Alice smiles back "Hi I'm Alice, Its very nice to finally meet you Crow!"

But as the years went by they grew apart but still Alice kept that old teddy bear as a reminder of her first true friend.

As the years went by Alice was slowly groomed by her father as she was to take over the ship and trade after he retired,as was tradition for the eldest to do so when the time came. But this wasn't what she wanted to do,she wanted to go out an live a life of adventure,make true friends who didn't care who her father was and to find true love like what her father and mother had.
 
Love was something Alice wasn't very good at,sure she was beautiful but for some reason her relationships were few and far between,mostly due to many for her crushes being afraid of her family or just her father in general. When it came to the few relationships she did have didn't last long as she would be at a village once or twice a years for a few weeks and would often return to find that the ones she loved had moved on unable to wait for her return. This reason is what cause Alice to develop a fear of being alone,growing stronger with each heartbreak. 

Then one year she had come back from another fail date to find her sister in tears,her father had passed while she was out,a sudden heart attack,a shock for everyone as her father was always so healthy it was strange he died so suddenly. It wasn't until she found the stopped watch near where they had found him. She had remember the stories of the watch the curse they were under....and as eldest it would now past to her....until it stopped once again.

 When she placed it on her neck hanging by a chain the room was suddenly filled with the soft ticking of a clock. Opening it she found that it was ticking again,she smiled sadly at the picture of her parents knowing her life was slowly ticking away.
The next day Alice called the crew together and said simply she was leaving control of the ship and its crew in her sisters hands,there was some outcry as it was breaking tradition. But Alice simply smiles "I'm going to see the world....Life's a ticking clock I don't have time to waste." She said finally deciding to go after her dreams. She wanted to enjoy life,to get the most out of it,after all her life was growing shorter with each tick of the clock.  So a few days later she set out on her own after some sad goodbyes and promises into the world. 

The first few months were extremely hard for Alice,good paying jobs were hard to find and the loneliness nearly drove her mad often coming home to the broken down flat she had found on a nearby Island only to collapse into a pile of tears.

But over time she finally gathered enough money for a small ship,got a few crew members and set out to the Grand Line! Along the way she slowly started to learn magic, slight of hand to help her out in fights, and also as a hobby. All the while getting a name for herself,the deadly beauty of the blues who had a crew of lost souls "The Queen of Maggots" They called her,the leader of the rotten unwanted scum of the Blues. She didn't care if the others said it made her sound scary and strong she hated it, it sounded so cruel and gross. So what if they were seen as scum,she loved them and was quick to teach any town who mistreated them. After a year or so they made it into the Grand Line,and soon they landed on Sabaody Archipelago,they drank,stole and had a flat out grand time...At lest until Alice heard about the Auctioning House.

A lovely sunny afternoon nothing could go wrong ri-BOOM!

An explosion sent the Auctioning House to the ground as figures ran out of the dust cloud,Alice and her crew along with a few thin slaves the most noticeable one a towering man with an iron mask on a single hole showing a black eye behind it looking like a gaping hole more then just an eye no while could be seen in it.

When they were all safely on the ship Alice looked through the treasure they had gotten found a box,inside a fluffy white fruit...picking it up she sniffed it examined it in her hands,nothing seemed wrong with it so with a shrug she took a bite the inside juicy and red like a watermelon. She chewed for a second before tensing up and struggling for a moment before finally swallowing it before running out and downing every drink she could find to get rid of the disgusting taste.

 She looked at the remaining fruit and with a yell of rage flung it over the side into the sea. When spotting the looks of her crew she started to explain "They were going to try an auction off a rotten fruit or someth-" 

Suddenly she touched the patched up bear tied to her side and fell. When the members ran over she looked dead,they started to panic when a voice angry but high pitched sounding rang out, the teddy bear was squirming on the rope it was tied to. "What the hell is going on!"

As Alice slowly got used to her power the world government was in a uproar,to destroy the Auctioning House was the last straw.The plan to rid themselves of the Queen of Maggots once and for all was set into motion...the fools.

Alice was sent tumbling forward as the ship was hit again two marine ships towered over her own,already fire was spreading over the ship,the dead bodies of her crew-mates laid everywhere some even floating in the the water turning it red. She couldn't help but stare at it before feeling a tightening in her chest before blacking out,she didn't remember much of what happened next not until a dripping sound snapped her out of her daze. All around her was bodies...or just parts in some cases, the deck was covered in a thin layer of blood,the smell of it was mixing with the smell of burning flesh and death, but even as she gagged she kept hearing the sound of dripping...

Looking down Alice saw in her blood soaked hand a head...with no body...she screamed dropping it,It was one the the captains of the ships. Looking around she saw past the marines a burning ship,no not just a ship it was HER ship! She was forced to watch it burn,unable to turn away she sat and waited the cold grip of hate and sadness surrounded her heart. This was her fault all her fault..She sobbed as she friends and ship burned a part of her going with it. How could she let all the friends she had made over the years down so easily?...It was later that she found a survivor,the towering man she had come to trust over the months at lest she wasn't completely alone..They would pay for this..She was going to make every last one of them pay.

Now a days Alice wanders around the Blues,her broken rage filled heart being the only thing that kept her going,well that and her faithful friend that stayed beside her side...
Abilities:

Candy Maker- A hobby she had since a child was making candy,she even wanted to open her own candy shop before she became a pirate! Sugar Skulls are her specialty~

Magic/Slight of hand-Over the years Alice has picked up a love for magic shows and soon she started studying it herself slowly getting better and now finding the art of slight of hand can be used for more then just entertainment.

Sewing and Toy making- After getting her powers Alice quickly learns that to be able to repair and make stuffed toys would be a good idea.

Torturer- Over the years Alice has learned and is slowly working  to perfect her torturing methods...to bad she often loses control when torturing others that she often avoids it when possible.
Inventory
Booboo Mcfluffykins
A small two inch rabbit earring plushie
Rabbit Plushie:
A old gold pocket watch with a picture of her mother and father in it.
Twin scissors/Twin Daggers
A bag of Sugar Skulls
Weapon:

The Sisters Of Fate
The Sisters of fate:

Weapon Description:
Two twin scissors that can be turned into daggers by closing and locking the blades together. When the blades are closed or locked together the beginning the the hand can be seen making a cross with a small round ruby at the end of each side. When not in use she keeps them in there own sheaths one engraved with wings of a demon the other the wings of an angel on one side and on the other the names of all her crew.
Weapon History:
Found rusty in a vault that they had robbed, it is clear that this pair had once been beautiful and to be quite old perhaps even up to a hundred years old. For a year the crew passed it around in secret helping repair and restore them till they looked brand new. They all carved their names into one side of the sheaths,so no matter what happened Alice would have a part of them with her always.They gave it to her on her birthday and as it is one of the only things she has to remember them by they are important to her .

Power Level Information

Character Strength: Proficient
Character Speed: Advanced
 Character Resilience: Proficient
Character Dexterity:Advanced

Devil Fruit Information

Devil Fruit Name:Nuigurumi Nuigurumi No Mi
Devil Fruit Type:Paramecia
Current Devil fruit Level: Level 2
Devil Fruit Mastery Level1st Level The user has the ability of placing their soul into a stuffed toy the size of a standard teddy bear and control toys of this size with ease and is able to remain in said toy for up to three posts.

2nd Level The user is now able to enter toys the size of a standard teddy bear and smaller up to 2 inches and control easily control them. They also can remain in said toy for an increased time of 4 posts.

3rd Level The user is now able to enter toys from the size of an adult, to a 2 inch plushie and be able to control them with ease. The time they can stay in said toy is  6 posts for standard size and smaller toys but at the the price of only 2 posts for larger toys. At this level certain senses of animals will become heightened. A stuffed rabbit will have better hearing then other toys but not as good as a real life rabbit.


4th Level:The user is now able to control stuffed toys twice the size of humans and the animal senses have now become as good as the real like counterparts. Is now able to stay in Large sized toys for 4 posts,Small and Standard for 6  posts and Extra Large for 3 posts
Devil Fruit Abilities:The user is able to place her/his mind and soul into stuffed animals by simply touching it.

Devil Fruit Weaknesses:
Fire,
Liquids (weighs down the stuffed animal making it slower and heavier. )
Loss of stuffing weakens attacks and makes it harder for soul to stay inside the stuffed animal.
Once the soul has entered a stuffed animal his/her human body becomes incapable of moving until said toy is destroyed or the user comes in contact with their body. Until then the users body takes on a lifeless appearance and is completely open for attack.
Standard Devil Fruit Weaknesses

Combat Information

Unarmed Combat:Mostly Kicks and Punches


Weapon Based Combat:

Time's up!-With the edges of the scissor blades she rushes at the enemy aiming to slice their throats with the blades. Targets bleed to death.

Red Tears of Time- Rushing up to the enemy Alice with try and stab the targets eyes out with her daggers.

Twisted Fates- Alice with run around the target,circling them while hacking and slashing them with her blades.

Devil Fruit Based Combat:


Combo Combat:


Haki:

RP Sample:
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Re: The Queen of Maggots

Post by Docile on Sat Mar 21, 2015 1:25 pm

Edits

Crimes Committed

• The only crimes which would be attributed to her bounty would be the follow:

-Assault on Marines
-Raid on Shabondy auction house

• I will ask that you remove murder of an admiral as the Admirals are a small select group of people I would advise never to use any of the big name titles in your character sheet other many people who would try would only provide more problems ruining continuity.

Dreams

• This is mostly more of a nitpick, however I will say although there is nothing against doing it, it is sort of frowned upon doing so as you have done with the goal of how your shichibukai is connected to a small time pirate character of your own. As I said its not an issue more of a nitpick.

Personality

• This doesn't really tell us much about what she is like at all. Please write more and actually explain her personality as most of it is about her anger & her love for Crow which to be perfectly honest doesn't tell us much about Alice other than she loves someone she was rejected by & she gets angry.

Bio

• No mention of any of the romance or anything to do with this romantic deal in Crow's history. Also to be honest I don't really appreciate having to read through that history to cross reference details.

• Alice set out to become a pirate because?

• Alice is called the Queen of Maggots because?

• The bio is very choppy & spends 90% of the time speaking about her love for Crow which to be honest seems rather pointless as it is meant to be more about how the character became who they are and a love story that never was doesn't really tell us anything as to why she committed the crimes she did or why she wants to get the most out of life.

Abilities

• Remove Silver Tongue as this requires you as the user to be able to do this and any user can quite easily with their character just say no to you all the time and thus this ability is rendered useless.

Weapon

• Write at least a 3 line description on the weapons

• Write at least a 3 line history. These weapons must've had a history before coming into contact with Alice. They're entire history can't have just been they were given to her by her crew. We want to know the weapon's history not the history of her their time with the user.

Power Levels

• You have used well over 15 stat points on your character. Review the shichibukai announcement.

Haki

• You're character will be unable to have haki with the levels of strength she will have.

Extras

• If any of this history is the same for her body guard which I see Vaetric has approved please make mention of it so we can edit it and make it approvable otherwise I will have to deny his approval and still have to ask for edits.
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Re: The Queen of Maggots

Post by Sweet Dreams on Sat Mar 21, 2015 4:46 pm

Edits Made: Added and removed crimes to give her more reasons for having such a high bounty.

Changed dreams around slightly.

Added a bit more to her personality

Removed the in love with Crow part and replaced it with her being a early childhood friend be it only for a short time.

Added why she became a pirate
Added why she is called "The Queen of Maggots"

Removed Silver Tongue

Added description and history to her weapon.

Removed Haki

Edits still needed: Fix Power Levels
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Post by Docile on Sat Mar 21, 2015 10:36 pm

Edits

Crimes Committed

• With crimes they only list the main ones so there is no point in mentioning what you've destroyed unless it is something so special its a one of a kind act of piracy. All of the crimes you added in only count as one thing. "Destruction of Property."

Bio

• Thought I'd written this bit into the previous grading but apparently not. Remove the bit about the admiral. In fact try not to use title characters such as yonko, admirals etc. As if we let one person then anyone can and we'll wind up with hundreds of people having interactions with title characters and them dying for them training them etc etc and each one will be different.
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Post by Sweet Dreams on Sun Mar 22, 2015 8:54 am

Edits made: Removed mention of an admiral from Crimes and Bio

Power Levels fixed (I think..)

Made changes to Crimes

hope that fixes everything :3
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Post by Docile on Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:29 pm

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Post by Sweet Dreams on Mon Feb 01, 2016 1:02 pm

Edits made: Removed mention of Shichibukai
Lowered Bounty
Lowered Power Levels.
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