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Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

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Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Wanderlust on Thu Feb 11, 2016 4:08 pm


Name. Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Translation. Sala-Sala Fruit, Dragon Model

Appearance. The rare Devil Fruit Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon takes the form of an apple. The fruit is rather big and round in shape, but it is still enough to be held in one hand. It is also covered by fire-shaped white components with swirl patterns on every of them. There is a swirled stem grew from the top of the fruit which is purple in color. Just like other Devil Fruits, the fruit tastes terrible and horrible, while its flesh has the color of yellowish green with the swirl patterns as well.

Type. Mythical Zoan

Strengths. Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon is said to be one of the rarest among the Zoan fruits, even rarer than Logia fruits. It enables the user to transform into a red dragon and a variety of its hybrid forms. As a result of eating the fruit, the user's senses of smell, sight and hearing are highly improved. When the user transforms into any of the forms, it grants the user one of the typical characteristics of a dragon: strong and thick dragon scales which often possess great durability and immunity to most natural elements such as fire. By that, it means the user can adapt to any natural environments as well. The dragon scales are said to be tough enough to resist weapon attacks like bullets and blades when the user reaches a certain level of mastering the fruit's power. The user is also allowed to use the ability flight when in any possible form. Most importantly, it allows the user to breathe fire and make us of it in a wide variety of ways, from melee to a ranged form of offense, depends on how well the user can utilize it.

Weaknesses. With this immense power comes many weaknesses, no matter how strong the fruit is. First of all, Devil Fruit users have these same and constant standard weaknesses of which they are rejected by the sea and become powerless when they are submerged in water. This also means that whoever eats a Devil Fruit loses the ability to swim. One of the mighty inventions, seastone is also a great weakness of Devil Fruits users because it can drain their energy until they cannot control their powers at will. Although the user is able to lower the damage of any kind of attacks with their scales, Busoshoku Haki, including seastone and water, are able to nullify the powers and thus making them able to be harmed without the protection of the dragon scales. The immunity to natural elements does not actually make the user invulnerable to every elemental attacks. The user can still be harmed by elements which have a naturally higher order than the classical ones. For example, fire cannot really hurt the user due to the dragon scales, but magma which is higher in order of superiority is able to.

Devil Fruit Progression.
Level 1 to level 2 requires 2 threads
Level 2 to level 3 requires 3 threads
Level 3 to level 4 requires 4 threads

Mastery levels.
1st level.
• Able to transform into a standard hybrid form and the full form of a dragon.
• Able to use the ability flight when in the full form of a dragon.
• Improved senses of smell, sight and hearing.
• Able to adapt to any natural environments.
• Immunity to most natural elements due to the dragon scales.

2nd level.
• Able to transform into three new forms of which focus either on strength, resistance or agility.
• Able to use the ability flight when in any possible form.
• Able to resist physical attacks due to the dragon scales.
• Allows the user to breathe fire

3rd level.
• Able to transform into three new forms of which are more unique and stronger than standard and focused forms.
• Able to transform into an unstable monster form of a dragon.
• Able to resist weapon attacks such as bullets and blades due to the enhanced hardness of the dragon scales.

4th level.
• Proficient in manipulation of dragon flames.
• Proficient in all forms of a dragon.
• Able to transform selective body parts into dragon form.


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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Vaetric on Thu Feb 11, 2016 9:20 pm

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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Wanderlust on Fri Feb 12, 2016 7:29 am

As I mentioned earlier, this is a rework of the Devil Fruit and I have Docile's approval for doing this, and now I have finished it. I hope it can be approved even though there might be many mistakes there. Yeah, so I'm gonna BUMP this.

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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Vaetric on Fri Feb 12, 2016 7:39 am

Ah, i'm afraid I cannot approve this in its current state, I'll focus on the main problem on it:

It's too close to the Phoenix Fruit, with the added bonus of the flames actually hurting other people.

"By transforming into a dragon of flames, the user can regenerate any wounds with the fire generated." If you wanted this kind of thing, you could've taken the Phoenix fruit instead, as it does the same thing.

Also, what kind of dragon is it? Western or Eastern?
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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Wanderlust on Sat Feb 13, 2016 5:20 pm

BUMP!



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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Vaetric on Sat Feb 13, 2016 9:06 pm

While the fruit itself is now aight, i'm afraid i'm going to have to halt you on one ground: The pictures you're linking aren't of dragons, Skyrim "dragons" maybe, but
that is a Wyvern.

Wyverns have four limbs, two legs and two wings that double as arms. Dragons have six limbs, four legs and two wings.

http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/seraphina/images/b/b2/Dragonseraphina.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160103194957 This is an actual, proper, authentically authentic true redundantly not false dragon

You're almost there, though
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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Wanderlust on Sun Feb 14, 2016 3:23 am

Removed the images and bump again.



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Re: Sara Sara no Mi, Model: Doragon

Post by Vaetric on Sun Feb 14, 2016 3:23 am

Approved
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